Fifty Shades of Edits |
I'm attempting to properly edit my way through 'Fifty Shades of Grey' Due to the content of the book, I'm sure this blog will get a bit NSFW, so be warned. This torture is being endured by sarahgalb |
STOP ABUSING ADJECTIVES.
Also, of course he smiles a smile. That’s what smiling is. You can’t smile a frown.
Cannot stop laughing.
Damn I was already giggling at the rest of her edits but I just fell into ridiculous guffaws at this. You can’t smile a...
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